Some Helpful Feedback

After requesting some feedback from someone who knows more about the field my last screenplay was set in, I got it back today with some extremely helpful notes. They wrote that they liked my overall story and the development of my plot. There were just some small things that I could improve both towards the accuracy of my representation of children, and towards strengthening the relationship between my two main characters. They were incredibly pointed and useful notes that I will definitely use when I go back in and revise it.